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The dark escapades of three child friends, who kill, one by one, undesirable people in their lives.

(K/f, snuff, hanging)

GRAPHIC CONTENT WARNING



   Daniel gets up on a large plastic bucket. He liked to do that every time he was about to say something important. It
also helped with his small stature. Two pairs of eyes were already locked on him. No one else is there, inside this old,
rusty, dirt filled warehouse. There were no doors to breach through. It was their hideout, the special place where their
twisted and dark thoughts weren't met with sighs, parent frenzy and talks of "puberty's difficulties".

"I hereby announce the first official meeting of the "Murder Club", he said in his young voice. He was only 12 years old,
but he was smart, certainly the smartest of the group, a cynical nature, his short haircut giving him a kind of geeky look.
Girly clapping followed this announcement. In front of Daniel, sat two girls. The first had long, curly blonde hair and her
large, excited smile showed off her braces. Annita was 15 and she was the more energetic, quirky and sadistic of the bunch.

Next to her, contrasting her colorful look, a goth girl by the name of Frederique, or "Fred" as the other two called her
now - weirdly enough, she didn't mind. With dark hair, clothes and attitude, she was the oldest of the group, aged 16.

The boy continued. "We will now draw to see who gets to choose first", he said, and produced three pencils, all held in his
right hand, so that only one side was visible. Both girls pulled their chosen pencil at the same time. Frederique's was the
shortest. "Ok Fred, you win", Daniel concluded. "Who is the first victim?"


VICTIM NUMBER ONE: SUSAN WILLIAMS



   Frederique always despised the popular girls in her school. Those with the fake personalities, who, on the surface
liked everyone, but never failed to talk shit behind their backs. The superficial, hot chicks who, at the end of the day,
didn't care about anyone but their own "status". Susan was the worst, at least in Frederique's book. Having dated the guy
that Frederique had a crush on during the first year of high-school, might have played a part in her decision. She had the
slim, but curvy body, and the full breasts that Frederique secretly wished she had. At 17 years of age, she was a catch and
she knew it, taking very good care of her appearance, accentuated by her expensive, sexy outfits.  

The kids waited for the right time, which didn't take long to come. Susan's parents would be out of town for the weekend.
And she would have the house to herself.

It was late at night. The kids made their way towards the peaceful suburban home. Daniel had planned everything and
brought everything they would need in a small bag. Annita, hidden in the bushes along the road, watched with her favorite
binoculars the teenage-girl getting ready for bed, her silky nightgown already on. They had to act fast, before the girl
could turn the alarm system on. Seeings Annita's phone-call (all cellphones had been set to vibrate), the two kids moved
closer, climbing the fence behind the entrance. They knew there was a backdoor, leading to the kitchen. The goth girl, who
had spend a lot of her private time practicing lock-picking, didn't take long to open the door. The victim's bedroom was
located on the 1st floor of the two-storey house.

As soon as Annita saw the two were inside the house - they signaled her - , with another phone-call to proceed to the next
stage. Annita shined a flashlight on Susan's window, flicking it on and off. The girl was confused by the strange sight and
went closer her to the window to see the source. Before she could see anything, a pair of small hands grabbed her arms,
pinning them to her sides. Before she could utter a scream, a chloroform soaked rag was pressed over her mouth and nose,
another hand keeping the back of her head from turning away from the fumes. Shocked and panicked, the girl quickly inhaled
the sedative, and was out in seconds.



  It would look like a pretty convincing suicide. A sponge had been shoved in the girl's mouth and tied there with an
scarf, gently placed over the victim's lips. No sign of a forceful gag would be ever visible. A pair of boxing gloves had
been put on her arms, and the laces tied them tightly together behind her back, as to avoid any scars from struggling on her
wrists.

While Annita and Daniel prepared the dark-brown haired girl and made the noose out of the Susan's bathrobe belt, Frederique
was making the perfect suicide note. Susan's school notes had a pretty big vocabulary, big enough to construct a good
suicide letter. Frederique photocopied each word, then cut and rearrange them in the order she wanted. Finally, she scanned
her collage on Susan's scanner, then traced her pen over the scanned version. In the end, it looked like the victim's
geniune writing style.

The best part was that Frederique had found out that Susan had recently been dumped by a college kid, and was very upset
about it. Her letter paid much attention to that "heartbreak", something Frederique was more than proud of, after reading
so many dark-romantic poems.

Finally, the restrained victim was coming to her senses. Daniel and Annita quickly lifted her onto her deskchair and passed
the noose, that was tied of the ceiling fan, around her neck, before sliding it snuggly around it. The girl was still
dizzy, but now stood on her own two feet. She could not do much, but whine in her gag, as she realized the severity of her
predicament.

"Is everything set?", asked Daniel, in a casual tone. "Just one more thing", said Frederique. She approached the frightened
girl, making her flinch and widen her eyes. She steadied her boot on the chair, the only thing keeping Susan from hanging.
Tears were now streaming from her victim's eyes, and as she frantically shook her head, moaning and begging her not to do
this, Frederique uttered: "this is for Ben, you stuck-up bitch!" and kicked the chair over.



   The young girl was in the air, her own neck keeping her from touching the floor, which was only a few inches away. The
kids watched the girl squirm silently, the pressure on her neck, together with the sponge inside her mouth, muffling any
gurgling attempts at breathing.

"Can i hold her feet?" asked Annita, enjoying the way the girl kicked her nude legs back and forth. "Ok, as long as you
don't leave any marks", agreed Daniel. The girl, whose face had turned purple now, had resulted in long stretches of her
beautiful legs, in any direction, trying to find something, anything, to grip on. "Her bed and her office are so far away,
i don't know why she bothers", chuckled the blonde girl, and held the dying girl's ankles, securely in her hands. Daniel
and Fred sat on the girl's bed, bored of waiting standing up.

After 3 or 4 minutes, it was obvious their first victim didn't have much time left, her strength slowly leaving her. After
a few "last minute" muscle spasms, she layed there, swaying only by the push of her last spasm. "Ok, we gotta go, untie and
ungag her, but don't touch anything else", adviced young Daniel, putting a chair next to Susan's to reach her. He stopped
to avoid the urine, wetting the girl's nightgown, panties and carpet, and dribbling down her lifeless legs.
The dark escapades of three child friends, who kill, one by one, undesirable people in their lives.


A different thing than usual. No sex in these series.

Comments are welcome. :)
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:iconsockittome24:
sockittome24 Featured By Owner May 1, 2017
I like it, but I like a painful beating before death.
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner May 2, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, beatings don't do it for me. :/
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:iconamyporter23:
AmyPorter23 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2017  Professional Writer
Interesting.
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to tickle your interest. ;) (Wink) 
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bluehangxyi Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2017
nice
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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:iconschrofan111:
schrofan111 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
very nice !
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you liked it. :)
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:iconschrofan111:
schrofan111 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2017
loved it !
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:iconwanteddetective:
Wanteddetective Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
Nice story. Looking forward to next parts :)
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. There's more on the way.
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:iconpsycho333:
Psycho333 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
Awesome work here
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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:iconabused-toy:
abused-toy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
They're fast and efficient aint they?
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
They sure are. They don't leave any clues behind.
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:iconcerberusking:
CerberusKing Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017  Student Writer
I liked it. It's got a thrilling darkness that is a nice read. I look forward to more.
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, there a couple of more ahead.
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:iconcerberusking:
CerberusKing Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017  Student Writer
Dope as hell, can't wait to read them.
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:iconmega1987:
mega1987 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017
this reminds me of those 2 girls who nearly killed their friend just to appease slenderman to be his acolytes...
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmm, is that a good thing? 
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:iconmega1987:
mega1987 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017
IMO... nope.... not a good thing.

nypost.com/2017/01/22/inside-k…

here a link for that story...
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa, that's brutal. 

At least they were not as methodical as the kids in my story.
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:iconmega1987:
mega1987 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
but still...

i find it unnerving for kids to do such acts....

except for self-defense purposes.

but still... I liked some of your stories... 
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:icondenkira7:
denkira7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Ι did it with kids on purpose, because it IS creepier that way. I like the concept where small, seemingly "helpless" kids can do such depraved acts in the end, and having no one suspect them.
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